This is just an experiment to see if any of these work.
The previous finished line and watercolour painting had an excellent comment from Noel, about a distracting window to the left of the composition, so I’ve gone a bit nuts here, playing with various cropping choices.
I think it’s possible to do this to paintings or drawings which don’t appear to be working. There will be a portion which is working fine, so it can be worth cropping that area and ditch the rest.
Easier said than done, but an intriguing exercise.